The showcase project demonstrates that I have a rather good handle on mying necessary local revisions like grammar. Reading through the final draft, very few, if any, errors in grammar were present. I tend to use a variety of simple, complex, and compound sentences in my essays. Throughout this draft, no sentence is run on or fragmented, and each is punctuated. I only cited a few sources in this essay, but the in text citations I make are correct in terms of notation. In text citations have the authors name followed by the page number from which the evidence was taken, which I did for all my evidence in my essay. My MLA citations at the end of the essay are only partial because I could only find so much of the information. I included the authors’ names, the text titles, and the page numbers from which the evidence was taken. Normally, the date of publication, the larger source the text was taken from, and so on, but these were unknown.